Essay topics:
Write a letter for your friend about your favourite sport.
Dear Jenny
How are you? Thank you very much for your previous letter about my favourite things. Now I want to tell you some of them. Do you play sports? I'd love to play sport, especially football cause of some reasons as:
The first, it is easy to play because we only need a ball and a small yard we can play it. Second it is good for my health. I can get strong muscles and avoid common sickness. Beside, it helps me relax after tired school. it is carries a lot of fun such as i can meet new friends.
my favourite sports is play football. So how are you? In the meantime, please write and let me know what's new with you warm wishes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... you some of them. Do you play sports? Id love to play sport, especially football...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
..., it helps me relax after tired school. it is carries a lot of fun such as i can m...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ool. it is carries a lot of fun such as i can meet new friends. my favourite spo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...of fun such as i can meet new friends. my favourite sports is play football. So h...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... meantime, please write and let me know whats new with you warm wishes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 515.0 1615.20841683 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 126.0 315.596192385 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0873015873 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04861855758 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706349206349 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 152.1 506.74238477 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4821253696 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 42.9166666667 106.682146367 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189997780115 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634283110617 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104006762786 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120003274866 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850427434988 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.1 13.0946893788 24% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 50.2224549098 189% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 11.3001002004 22% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.96 12.4159519038 40% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 10.7795591182 46% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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