You live in a room in the college hostel which has severe problems. You would like to move into another room and need your hostel super's permission for that.
Write a letter to the hostel super. In your letter,
• introduce yourself
• describe the problems
• explain what type of room you would prefer
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the inconvenience we are facing in the current accommodation. It would be a great option, if you could change my room.
Let me explain you in more detail. I am, Tim frank, student of 1st year, doing major in Hotel management. I am staying in room number 415 on sharing basis with Simon George, who is in the same field.
The problem which we are facing currently is the room size. The room is not as spacious for two people. There are extra furniture placed in the room other than our beds. Most of the time, we have got hurt because of sharp edges on the furniture.
We had conversation with some of the students from previous academics and they informed us that the room which is allocated to us currently, is only for single person and I also feel the same. So, I would request you to shift me to other room, which would be spacious and could accommodate two people easily with all the basic furniture you provide in the room.
I will be waiting for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... furniture. We had conversation with some of the students from previous academics and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5202020202 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43355219967 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2421861762 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8461538462 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214537384105 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755445219273 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468834088635 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113244170862 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398685565234 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.