" Life is better today than it was 100 years ago. " Do you agree?
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I totally agree life is so much better than 100 years ago because our lives have changed along with the development of the society.
Firstly, it’s no doubt that nowadays people get better healthcare. They are guided to have a healthy and balanced lifestyle and there are more choice of medicines and treatments for illnesses. Scientists have found the treatments for many diseases that could not be cured before.
Secondly, people can have fun with various types of entertainment such as movies, music, travelling, shopping only and it is easily to approach. They can just stay at home and see the ‘world’ in their own eyes.
Last but not least, 100 years ago, it’s so hard for people to communicate to each other if they live far from each other. But nowadays people can talk and see each other via means of communications. The distance doesn’t matter anymore.
To sum up, there is no doubt our life is getting better and better comparing to the past. I believe we will have more things to expect in the future.
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