Human race is sill evolving, getting more civilized and adapting the technological renaissance. Technology has made life nowadays easy compared with life in the last century when my grandparents were children. Thus, I agree with the statement. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will expound in the following essay.
To commence with, there are more resources available today then hundred years back. Resources like vehicles, bigger market, rails, aeroplanes, internet etc. were not available at that time. Traveling from one place to another on bullock carts took days. My grandma tells me stories of her childhood. There were negligible vehicles when she was a child. She used to travel on animal driven carts usually. Today, a person in corporate cannot even imagine not having car. Additionally, resources like internet, smartphones etc. have made the world accessible today, which was not possible hundred years back. My grandma used to write letters to her parents and the postal process was not quick as it is today. Rapid advancements in technology has made an average person's life more easy. Moreover, globalization, socio-political meetings of the world leaders made the trade easy, which resulted in increment in per capita income.
Secondly, facilities at the time of my grandparents were not good especially, medical facilities. There were less awareness and education among the people about the medical treatments. Child death rate was higher at that time, which reduce due to exponential advancement in the medical sector. The sophisticated methods of medical treatment has controlled the risk of big diseases. As per a survey, the occurrence of epidemics has been reduced be more than 75 percent of what it was in the 19th century. Access to better healthcare has reduced the child/infant death rate. Therefore, life was not easy at that time because of the risk of getting caught of a disease.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that life is much easier today than the time of our grandparents. This is because of the enhancement in the technology and the better life style which contributed to the humanity in positive way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 761, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ments in technology has made an average persons life more easy. Moreover, globalization...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17714285714 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86997120088 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7319161184 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6923076923 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26923076923 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215194307036 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553334038944 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549046793084 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131150660102 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451054433906 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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