Write a letter to a book store manager who is living in another city. Ask him/her to make available a book that you are interested in. In your letter, you should tell:
– What book you are looking for?
– Why you need this book?
– How you plan to purchase the book?
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inquire about a publication on Artificial Intelligence. I am John Gresham from Birmingham.
I am looking for the latest edition of Artificial Intelligence by Anthony Hopkins which was released last week. The book is still neither available in stores at my place nor online yet. Fortunately one of my peers who was able to get a copy from your store advised me to write to you.
I am a research student at the University of Birmingham. The final year project comprises of AI and Machine learning. The concepts in this book provides a deeper insight to robotics which is essential to my project completion.
I would be grateful if you can keep a copy of the book for my sake. I can arrange the payment through a bank transfer if that is acceptable or I would not hesitate to visit London store for the purchase. Please let me know the best option. Looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
John Gresham
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I am John Gresham from Birmingham. I am looking for the latest edition of Ar...
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Line 11, column 81, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...y of Birmingham. The final year project comprises of AI and Machine learning. The concepts i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78313253012 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79017130051 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0780517264 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0769230769 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208585684628 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059511181233 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717819160231 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110553378021 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734953850644 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.