Q18. When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?
asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
finding information about the problem using the Internet
taking a long time to think about the problem
Use specific details and examples in your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
There are different approaches when facing problems, and it is critically important to solve it in a way that best fits you. Personally, I believe that getting tips from someone with experience is the best solution. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in my subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, a person who experienced the same concern can identify the problem and offer a solution, which allows the individual to gain specific alternatives to fix the issue. A person who's experienced the same trouble also knows how one should feel, so the adviser can not just offer detailed solutions that best suit one when solving a particular struggle, but can also empathize with the individual. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About two years ago, I was having difficulties in raising my test scores. So, I asked my older sister on how she improved her grades when she was in high school. My sister also struggled with her exams, and I thought that she could give me a few tips. She offered me some advice on how to learn more effectively for each subject. Consequently, after I followed her studying techniques, my test results improved, and I was very thankful for my sister. Therefore, my example portrays one significant benefit that I gained by asking an experienced person.
Secondly, I believe that talking directly with someone who's experienced a similar concern is the shortest route in gaining tips compared to the latter two choices. Discussing the situation with someone who was in the same situation can guide the individual to the most effective and suitable path, which is beneficial for the individual as they can tackle one’s issue without consuming a lot of time and effort. Drawing from my experience, I faced several challenges when I was editing my speech video for the first time last summer. To tackle several problems, I first searched on the internet, but because there was abundant information, I couldn’t sort out which source was reliable, and it took me a lot of time to answer a few questions. However, after I turned to help from my father, who often edits videos at his workplace, he taught me how to effectively use editing software and fundamental skills. It only took me about an hour to master the editing process. If I hadn’t asked my father for help, I would have taken a lot of time to learn basic techniques and to complete my video editing.
In conclusion, I firmly argue that getting advice from an experienced person is the best way to overcome troubles than the other two choices. This is because the adviser can offer certain detailed tips to approach the problem, and because one can obtain solutions without consuming too much time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...alternatives to fix the issue. A person whos experienced the same trouble also knows...
^^^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...ieve that talking directly with someone whos experienced a similar concern is the sh...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86637931034 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75306552735 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515086206897 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.336564528 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.523809524 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0952380952 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181269303878 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561255506357 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352395369338 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123371021068 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451548446232 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.