you have an extra room in your apartment and would like to rent it out to a student, write a letter to university council office
describe your apartment and facilities
mention why you want to rent out
say what kind of tenant you would prefer
Dear Sir,
My name is Harsimran kaur and I live in Pacific society just adjacent to the university. I am writing to express my willingness to rent out one room of my apartment to any of the university student.
Apparently, I live on ground floor and the room i am offering has a separate door to outside for entrance. The tenant will be provided 24*7 water and electricity facility which is of significant importance to everyone. I will also provide wifi facility included in rent charges which is a dire need of students. Although, I do not have separate parking, I will share my parking lot for one vehicle. The rent for per month will be 2000 Rs which I believe is quite reasonable and affordable. Apart from this, the market is very close and bus facility to commute is quite frequent.
I want to let out this room as I believe it would be a mutual benefit fer me and the tenant. It will be a source of income for me and as I live alone, someone's company could make the system better. I would prefer to let out my room to girls. I personally believe that women are proficient organizers in keeping the surroundings clean. It would be better for me to share with a girl and i will feel secure.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Harsimran kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ly, I live on ground floor and the room i am offering has a separate door to outs...
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Line 4, column 386, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... better for me to share with a girl and i will feel secure. Looking forward to h...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47435897436 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65632239237 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5451058711 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217325558904 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711440868329 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688699602772 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117191220245 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255612331618 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.