You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your
properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of
building a new fence.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• say what the problems are
• explain how a new fence will solve the problems
• suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost
Dear Mr Patel,
Hope you are doing good and your family is in a healthy condition. I am writing to draw your attention to the fence problem between our properties, which has got old and damaged,due to which your dog enters our premises destroying the plants and flowers.
There is a small hole in the fence, good enough for the dog to pass to the other side. A few days back, he ripped the tomatoes from the garden and also destroyed the lily plant kept in the backyard. I know that your dog is quite naughty and loves to play in the soil or mud, but we must repair immediately to avoid any further damage.
The new fence will not only restrict the dog but also my children will not come there from the backyard. Additionally, the fence structure has also aged, it can fall on either side someday and can cause damage to our family members.
I would request you to let's divide the fencing cost equally among us, as both of our family are sharing it. I have already taken a few quotations from our local suppliers, which is attached along with the letter.
I am waiting for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , due
...roperties, which has got old and damaged,due to which your dog enters our premises d...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ich is attached along with the letter. I am waiting for your positive response. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50724637681 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33926192943 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9529058294 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8181818182 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233908072148 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797924544507 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551508251385 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114791817377 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708938559483 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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