Write a paragraph to describe an event you used to witness
Although I have witnessed so many events in my life, my cousin's wedding was the event that made me feel so touched. The wedding ceremony of Linh- my cousin, which was held last year in Dalat Palace, a big palace in Dalat city. Our immediate family and many friends of my sister were there to wish Linh and her spouse, Minh, a lifelong commitment. I love the way my sister and brother-in-law celebrated their wedding party. They decided to splash out on clothes and decorations since they wanted their big day to be unforgettable and perfect. While Linh looked so stunning in Ao dai - the traditional dress of Vietnamese women, Minh was so elegant in a black suit with a bow tie on. Also, there was so much delicious food and we were served by dedicated waiters. We laughed a lot, we had so much fun and at the end of the party, we all raised our glasses to wish the bride and groom health, happiness and forever love. The moment that was embedded in my memory was the time when they held hands and departed to their new home which almost brought me to tears. That was a day that I would never forget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36585365854 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39389304558 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9771132757 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0318850393093 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.012359779889 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037079339667 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0318850393093 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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