Describe a time you were sleepy but had to stay awake
You should say:
When it was
Why you had to stay awake
How you kept yourself awake
And explain how you felt about it.
I’m gonna tell you a time that I was very exhausted but I had to stay awake.
It was such a significant test because it helped me to graduate the high school àn take a place in the university. I spent a lot of time for this exam’s preparation but I was still so nervous and stressful about that.
In the night before that,I decided to check it once again. After 3 hour studying, I felt so dizzy then did a short rest to splash my face with water, do some gentle exercise such as rotating my neck and my arms. I also got a galss of cold water and I had to confess that all these thing worked well immediately.
To be honest, I just could maintain my focusing for more 1 hour. My eyes was so tried and I thought that I should go to bed as soon as possible cause may be I would wake up late in the next morning.
Forturnately, I got a impressive score in that day which is 8.8 for maths.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ul about that. In the night before that,I decided to check it once again. After 3...
^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...old water and I had to confess that all these thing worked well immediately. To be honest...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd I had to confess that all these thing worked well immediately. To be honest, ...
^^
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...uld go to bed as soon as possible cause may be I would wake up late in the next mornin...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the next morning. Forturnately, I got a impressive score in that day which is 8...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.03370786517 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38430037363 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679775280899 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.18502613 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7777777778 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122492204079 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516475341659 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932983886827 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826087822423 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115113215943 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.09 12.4159519038 49% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.