Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that the young should participate in voluntary social activities when they are free since this brings benefits for both them and society. From my perspective, I totally agree with this view.
Taking part in unpaid community work provides teenagers a lot of advantages. Firstly, teenagers can be trained various skills like teamwork, presentation, cooperation, even leading. Almost activities require children work together to have a good result. Besides, they will be used to share their opinions with others so they will be more confident. Secondly, community work can help teenager have more friends, this can be helpful for them in the future. Thirdly, spending time in unpaid community work can help reduce time on playing games which may be harmful for their eyes and brain. Finally, children can understand the meaning of the life thanks to working community activities.
Teenagers join unpaid community work is also helpful for community. As mentioned above, young will understand the life’s meaning. This makes them have good behavior for society and contribute to making the life better. Secondly, if teenagers do unpaid community work, government do not have to pay money to hire people to do that work and spend that money to do more useful work like building house for homeless, opening school for poor children… Finally, young take part in community work will help spread positive energy for people who are needing help.
In conclusion, I completely think teenager should join unpaid community work. This not only bring benefits for young but also help society more beautiful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24031007752 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58701114127 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.8273397146 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388015595647 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134910919742 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886832677558 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22918918424 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760072922341 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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