People have divided opinions on using computers. Some say that computers have made their easy. But others speak of the complication that computers have brought into their lives. Which of these two opinions do you agree with?
It is undeniable that computers bring us many benefits and also drawbacks in our lives and work. In my viewpoint, I agree with the opinion that computers have made our easy because of useful applications to service each person's intention.
To begin with, by means of computers, we can connect to the Internet easily. Computer devices are furnished with multiple progressive techniques, so it helps us connect the Internet with a large number of utilities such as surf websites, look up information, and many beneficial tools for each field. With the support of computer, the popular software like Word, Excel, and Powerpoint which assist us to work and study conveniently
Furthermore, there are many types of computers that help people carry them whenever we need them. They are light, thin, and simple. When we have to attend agenda, meeting or study foreign. we need to bring our computers to use them. In fact, these days most people contact via online method. If we have a computer, we might discuss and connect with colleagues, friends easily. Computers not only do provide many entertainment functions as watch movies, listening to music or chat, it also supports us in work. For example, there are no devices better than the computer to service our jobs due to computers can download almost all of software. One more thing is they can store important documents in computer with giant storage.
In conclusion, it is firm conviction, I subscribe to that it is so essential for us when using the computer in our lives since they have many outstanding advantages
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... of useful applications to service each persons intention. To begin with, by means o...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...o it helps us connect the Internet with a large number of utilities such as surf websites, look u...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assist us to work and study conveniently Furthermore, there are many types of com...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ttend agenda, meeting or study foreign. we need to bring our computers to use them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99239543726 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72103114042 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4896685393 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291283117035 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10182574632 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716366616249 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191219520389 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791930542632 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.