Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Success is a relative as it means different things to different people. Some think that earning a large sum of money makes a person more successful, whereas others are of opinion that people in professions such as research and teaching are more successful. This essay will discuss both perspective. I, however, side with the latter view.
On the one hand, people with affluence are able to afford to purchase tangible things which potrays that they are successful. In other words, opulents like a big house, luxurious car, and expensive vacations are a few comparative components to measure how much a person is successful. Moreover, a financial status to spend on anything without having to worry about fiance is an ability society take it as a means to be successful. Thus, monetary gains of a person will enable him to reflect his level of success by possessing material things.
On the other hand, people who assert that (include myself) individuals similar to scientists and teachers are to be considered as more successful, give their reasons as below. Firstly, jobs that involve making lives of people better are gratifying in nature. Not all people want to work to make money. Although the pay scale may not be high, some people still want to work towards the upliftment of the society. For instance, it is a known fact that teaching are not only hectic but also underpaid. In spite of this, many people want to be employed as a pedagogue. Because they working to shape younger generations which will become the adults of tomorrow, and this responsibility established a connection to being successful
Secondly, many advancements in science has enabled to save millions of lives of people all over the world. It is in hands of doctors and scientists to find different ways to save people’s life. Without their efforts, world would have not moved towards modernisation. Although a few may only be recognised by people, many scientists work countless hours to create inventions because it is there passion which drives them and gives them energy. Thus, people contributing to society are successful in true terms since they work with dedication to ameliorate the lives of citizen.
To conclude, while the richness of people may define how successful they may be, the real success is measure by having contentement in life which can be achieved by working for the betterment of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little may'.
Suggestion: little may
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for instance, such as, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76338265387 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7389320293 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255190186275 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702963469486 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585587266656 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138325449192 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640727155373 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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