Weird animal

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Weird animal

Axolotl (Mexican Walking Fish)

Although the Axolotl is also known as a walking fish it is actually an amphibian and is a salamander (part of the order Caudata). Its scientific name is Ambystoma Mexicanum. This amphibian is so endangered that it is only found near Mexico City in Lake Xochimilo which is blocked off by the Mexican Government.Even though these poor amphibians are endangered Mexicans consider roasted Axolotls as a rare delicacy. Another factor causing it to be endangered more critically each day is the amount of pollution dumped in that one lake. They are rarely found in the ...

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