Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
One of the most recent conspicuous trends of current contemporary era is rise of emerging invention. It is fair to say, advancement in invention has give planet earth a new ray of sunshine. Although there are demerits to this phenomenon there are equal and significant positive results. This essay will discuss how inventions like technological advancement have bought some impressive changes and why some times results can be prolix.
Firstly, technology is by far the greatest invention of all times. It has not only shrunken the world and made earth a global society, but it has given every Individual a chance to speak their perspective. For instance, advancement in communication technology, through social media, Television and many other platforms to unite and show support, in case of injustice. Likewise it has been there when there is celebration to be made. Therefore, we can say inventions in technological revolution have enlightened the world with the sense of togetherness.
Secondly, technology also has it pitfalls and it can be quit depressing at times. It affect overall development, especially in younger generation because of their inability to comprehend and chose right or wrong. For example, a political unrest may result in hopelessness, and it’s fair to say it manifests itself. Hence, it’s fair to say technology inventions can have adverse effects and harm worlds tranquillity.
To conclude, this essay discussed why invention in technology has helped changed peoples prospective and why it can be at times can be a unwelcome influence.
In my opinion, it’s hope in the face of technology and it’s a positive one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...and show support, in case of injustice. Likewise it has been there when there is celebra...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... it can be quit depressing at times. It affect overall development, especially in youn...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...their inability to comprehend and chose right or wrong. For example, a political unre...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ctive and why it can be at times can be a unwelcome influence. In my opinion, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35741444867 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15485346369 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3092211858 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762473169685 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026283378352 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256572789484 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394215329573 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272851040427 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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