Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
One of the most recent conspicuous trends of current contemporary era is rise in invention. It is fair to say, advancement in invention has give planet earth a new ray of sunshine. Although there are demerits to this phenomenon there are equal and significant positive results. This essay will discuss how inventions have bought some impressive changes and why some times results can be prolix.
Firstly, without invention it would have not been impossible to be efficient and productive and overcome slothful ways. It has not only shrunken the world and made earth a global society, but also provided every Individual a chance to speak their perspective. For instance, communication technology invention in face of social media, Television and many other platforms unite people from all walks of life and show support, in case of injustice. Likewise it has been there when there is celebration to be made. Therefore, we can say inventions in technology have enlightened the world society with the sense of togetherness.
Secondly, invention also has it me pitfalls and it can be quit depressing at times. It can affect overall development, especially in younger generation because of their inability to comprehend and chose right or wrong. For example, excessive television watching can have negative effect, such as anti-social behaviour, depression, obesity and lost of human connection. Hence, it’s fair to say technology inventions can have adverse effects and harm societies tranquillity.
To conclude, this essay discussed why invention in technology has helped people to unite and why it can be at times be an unwelcome influence.
In my opinion, it’s hope in the face of everyday inventions and it’s a positive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...and show support, in case of injustice. Likewise it has been there when there is celebra...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...their inability to comprehend and chose right or wrong. For example, excessive televi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34909090909 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03048096447 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2255226956 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10179554126 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035055717474 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021953052539 0.071462118173 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572500486687 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175497844213 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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