Computer technology
One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the inventions of
antibiotics, aeroplanes and the computer. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of
concerns in society. In my opinion, the invention of the computer has more negative impacts than
positive while antibiotics and aeroplanes are boons for society.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefits of the inventions of
antibiotics is the increased potential in survivability. For example, human, unlike in the past now have
less chance to get diseases like smallpox, viruses and invisible bacteria as it increases the strength to the human body to fight with these diseases, thanks to efficient development in antibiotics.
On the other hand, there is a deluge of arguments in my favour of stance. One of the most preponderant
one is that the invention of the computer has negative consequences for the community in various ways.
Firstly, the invention of the computer is taking roles of human which resulted in an increased unemployment
rate, such as in car manufacturing sector. According to the “Times Magazine January 2013 edition”, the
proportion of unemployment rate in America has increased from 10 percent to 30 percent. Secondly,
people are much more relying on technology and becoming lazier and less efficient.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of Dubai is taking a great initiative in educating its citizens against
the negative impact of the computer. Citizens are being encouraged to spend a significant portion of their
time in physical activities like games and exercises in order to compensate for their computer reliance
addiction.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits,
the drawback of the invention of the computer is indeed too dire to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 31.9359605911 185% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28338762215 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04821605718 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3936160876 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159728845421 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04973922602 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545379234496 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459567950698 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654135301773 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.