Computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is to see the colossal upsurge in the use of computer technology. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in society. In my opinion, computer technology has more negative impacts than positive in society.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefits of computer technology is the availability of extra time. For example, mother, unlike in the past, now have more time to spend with their families, as less time is spent on the house chores, thanks to efficient computerised household machinery.
On the other hand, there is a deluge of arguments in favour of my stance. one of the most preponderant ones is that computer dependency has negative consequences for the community in various ways. Firstly, people are losing jobs because machines are increasingly taking over the roles of humans, such as in the car manufacturing sector. According to “Times Magazines January 2013 edition”, the proportion of Americans employed in manufacturing has dropped from 30 percent to 10 percent today. Secondly, a large portion of the human population has lost enthusiasm because of technological dependency and is increasingly becoming lazier and less efficient.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of Dubai is taking a great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impact of computer technology. citizens are being encouraged to spend a significant portion of their time in physical ability like games and exercises in order to compensate for their computer reliance addiction.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits, the drawback of computer technology is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3031358885 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0463086047 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2235464548 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.076923077 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144031418556 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524641647514 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651216721343 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803162647751 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404707222528 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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