Cultural Shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
Globalisation has bought some opportunities and challenges. Migration path is adopted by numerous people in contemporary society. Although, few emigrants struggle to settle in a new environment, there are various possibilities to overcome cultural challenges. This essay will discuss, people struggling to adjust in new countries and solutions to overcome challenges of settling in a new country.
Firstly, migrants leave their home country to get a better life. However, sometimes they get a cultural shock once they land in a new territory. Migrants struggle to understand local people’s dialect, point of reference, lifestyle and social community setup, which makes them feel left out and isolated. Emigrants leave behind their family ties and friends support, which they are use to back in their own country. Thus, migrants face difficulties after moving to a new country.
Secondly, to overcome difficulties and cultural shock, migrants and the government can work collaboratively. Migrants can learn few references points, geographic locations, join social media pages for new arrived migrants. On the other hand side, government can provide information on community centres, translator services, organised living assistance for first few months with a sponsored family. Therefore, some novel solutions can help people ease the stress of settling in, and avoid cultural shock in new countries.
To conclude, this essay discussed, difficulties faced by newly arrived migrants and solutions to surpass cultural shock. Government support and some self research can help migrants can immigrants integrate in new countries easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
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...ies and friends support, which they are use to back in their own country. Thus, mig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80165289256 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04587783147 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599173553719 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4798814125 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212224515741 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716082856068 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654009447387 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130283042589 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550264396405 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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