Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.

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Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.

Over- packaging product has become a conspicuous trend in today's world. It is a moot question whether consumers should take the responsibility of avoiding over-packaged products or it is the producers accountability to check. This essay will discuss a balance between causes leads to over- packaging and why consumers must evade movement.

Over packaging have adverse effects on environment and cost effectively. It actually pollutes, devastate the environment and other than that cost of over- packaging is added to the product which makes its more expensive. For example over packaging leads to more material that would lead to more deforestation of trees. And excess tax would indulge the consumer to pay more for the product. Therefore over packaging is hazardous for environment and consumers.

Consumers should discard the over packaged products. They should go for bio degradable products. For example biodegradable materials can be recycled and used for other purposes. And would save consumers of over paying the cost and control environmental measures. Hence it is apparent consumers must elude over packaging product.

This essay discuss causes leading to over packaging and consumers must take the foremost responsibility in avoiding. In my opinion consumers must take primary responsibility in neglecting over packaged products from the producers.

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Average: 7.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'producers'' or 'producer's'?
Suggestion: producers'; producer's
...ing over-packaged products or it is the producers accountability to check. This essay wil...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e consumer to pay more for the product. Therefore over packaging is hazardous for environ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ost and control environmental measures. Hence it is apparent consumers must elude ove...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, therefore, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65048543689 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06542539915 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 139.433497537 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5549608708 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7333333333 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323532601774 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138351057149 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830296392459 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228370474778 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560441037191 0.0609392437508 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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