Do you think that place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with example.
The place of the people where they brought up is an effect of their actions and fulfilments. Of course, the origin of human beings would be considered for their behaviours and attitudes.
We could have many examples to prove the above statement that people has effect on their accomplishments due to the country, language and environment. For example, Indians have their attitude to save money for the future and their generation, so that they give more importance for unused things like TV, fridge etc. They never threw, once it repaired. They tried as much as possible to re-use the things. Because they brought up in the environment which has more middle class families, poverty line people and do not have lavish people. So surely, they could behave as miser when compared to other developed countries such as US and UK.
Another point of view that the cultures also plays a very important role in their accomplishments. That's why, the dressing of the people, especially women totally different from the western countries. The male and female are mingling with one another is totally reverse when we compared with US, UK etc. The sexual violence is more in America compared to India.
In conclusion, the environment will decide the habits of the people and their mind. So the influence would be considered in all circumstances in all over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97807017544 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67520490783 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609649122807 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2923356702 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0714285714 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800219781921 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245885121277 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383296664463 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048808628692 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220866438996 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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