Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?
Role model play a pivotal role in young persons life. These influencers can be sports personalities or cinema artists, people follow them wholeheartedly. Although, following footsteps of sports hero’s and movie celebrities have divided opinions. This essay will discuss, why spots stars are better choice of role model than movies artists.
Firstly, sports person represent hardware, consistency, accepting challenge attitude. Commoners can look up to sports personalise for inspiration when going though struggles of their own. Comeback is better then setback is what the attitude sports men live by. Sportsmanship promote resistance and fairness. Hence, it can be said sports hero’s make better influencers.
Secondly, movie starts are usually immunised in glamour and unrealistic lifestyle. They play a character different to what they actually are in real life and on screen. They master the act of playing scripted personalities though their acting. It is hard to consider someone a role model with multiple personalities. Therefore, it can be said movie celebrities represent false impression.
To conclude, this essay discussed sportsmen inspire us to face life challenges head on, and movie starts impersonate unrealistic lifestyle. In my opinion, ideal role model would be a sports star.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...Role model play a pivotal role in young persons life. These influencers can be sports p...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...ugh struggles of their own. Comeback is better then setback is what the attitude sports men...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74871794872 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05330249849 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9914756212 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.0625 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1875 20.9669160288 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187710625287 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620048187075 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603788087989 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114196748377 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258477886848 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.9458128079 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.18 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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