Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some bad and good effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is to see the colossal upsurge in the use of mass communication. There is a widespread worry that the information revolution will only lead to a myriad of concerns in society. In my opinion, this revolution has more negative effects than positive in society.
On the one hand, critics may point out one of the most significant benefits of the information revolution is the availability of extra knowledge. For example, students, unlike in the past, now have more time to spend on mass media, as less time is spent on studies, thanks to efficient communication technology.
On the other hand, there is a deluge of arguments in favour of my stance. One of the most preponderant ones is that communication dependancy has negative consequences for the communities. Firstly, people are losing jobs because machines are increasingly taking over the roles of humans, such as in the car manufacturing sector. According to "Times Magazine January 2013 edition", the proportion of Americans employed in the car manufacturing has dropped from 30% to 10% today. Secondly, people are much much relying on mass communication, hence becoming less efficient and less productive.
Lastly, the government of Dubai is taking a great initiative in educating its citizens. citizens are being encouraged to spend a significant portion of their time on physical exercise rather than understanding the complexity of the information revolution happening around the world.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits, the drawback of the information revolution in terms of mass communication is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Suggestion: much
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30882352941 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21866548836 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1744694062 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143579113777 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480648442665 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462255610989 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862573598161 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490219139545 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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