Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions?

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Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions?

The importance of youth’s involvement in crime which was debated has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of increasing crime rate among youth has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend on society in recent years. It can be said, young people are involved more in criminal activities due to lack of support from government and community. This essay will elaborate reasons why youths of today are involved in crime and offer solutions to overcome these challenges and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why youngsters are involved in crime related activities, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that , governments lack of planning towards positive development of young individuals. Example for instance, lack of counselling services, deficiency in education programs such as, acceptable behaviour in society. Moreover, inadequate support for entrepreneurship programs, lack of job opportunities for fresh candidates. Furthermore, inadequate planning for young people by government is the main reason for increasing crime rate among young people.

Another reason why youth crime control must be analysed to solve, criminal behaviour among young individual’s issue is that, regulation can be implemented to minimise the crime rate among young people and thus will result in reducing the strain on the society. For instance, free library access, free short term courses to develop skills, free education, career counselling programs, encouragement from family and funding youth workers program. Based on that, it can be agreed that crime rate among young people can be controlled if there is enough collaboration.

To conclude, approaches to deal with problems of crime among young are numerous, but the most effective one is that, youths getting adequate support from government, families and communities, which is not impractical and unattainable, but comprehensible and feasible.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69230769231 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12818726351 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.662572109 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179579111008 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732931088609 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489871768606 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112676137107 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600376758598 0.0609392437508 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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