The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?
On of the most conspicuous trends in this contemporary era is same sex marriage. Gay marriage has divided societies between traditional and contemporary views. Although, some expertise believe gay marriage should be legalised, some expertise disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss, it is ever individual’s constitutional rights to get married to choice of their partner and why same sex marriage can have some detrimental effects in society.
Firstly, marriage is human right. It is not restricted to sex, religion, race. As any individual, gay people are humans first and they have the same rights, to love, to get married, to eat and drink like any other human. As marriage is a life long commitment, it’s individual’s choice to choose their partner for life, be it a male or a female. As love can be in any form. Therefore, it can be said same sex marriage should be authorised.
Secondly, same sex marriage can have negative impact in society. It is regarded as unnatural to conventional beliefs. Gay marriage is also liked to having deadly disease, such as HIV AIDS and imbalance between male per female and vice-versa. It’s also leave society with divided viewpoints which may cause distress and threaten societies peace. Thus, it can be said gay marriage can tear societies old values apart.
To conclude, this essay discussed, why all human have rights to be married- including gay marriage and, same sex marriage can result into division in societies traditional beliefs. In my opinion, gay marriage should be legalised and proudly supported, because love is love.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: One
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ner for life, be it a male or a female. As love can be in any form. Therefore, it ...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ner for life, be it a male or a female. As love can be in any form. Therefore, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21153846154 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95471491631 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546153846154 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3969632702 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7058823529 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338834206038 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11061956581 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677361668182 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223597232787 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687630318163 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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