It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is a life long commitment. Marriage in some cases burden us with uncalled responsibilities. Although, marriage can thrive in some circumstances, in most cases it is believed that getting married before completion of education and obtaining a job is imprudent. This essay will discuss, why marriage can be beneficial in rare cases, and why getting married before acquiring material status is not a positive move.
Firstly, marriage is celebration of two people committing to each other - emotionally, physically and beyond. It’s is, in an alternative terms- a team work throughout life. Some marriages are successfully, perhaps due to mature emotional intelligence, support and encouragement, which can play a vote role in achieving success as a couple, even if marriage is considered as a obstacle in progression of a person. Hence, we can say marriage in some scenarios can have positive outcome.
Secondly, extra responsibility added due to marriage commitment can hinder our ability to focus in achieving our goals. Singular mind focus has higher chances of achieving success than divided attention. For example, one can be more mobile with work, study and life, if there are no dependents. Therefore, it can be said marriage bonds us to extra accountability.
To conclude, this essay discussed why married can be good- when motivating each other is concerned and why sometimes it can bound a person with extra responsibilities. In my opinion, I agree to the fact that, getting married before acquiring a job or education should not be encouraged.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in most cases, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34274193548 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25331447848 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7564678306 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106995869046 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410165518164 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748395471256 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797897397181 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805211911385 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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