Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Agree or disagree. Pros and cons
Undoubtedly, no one can abnegate that present world has become a global village. Therefore, people are motivated to buy their necessities from the competitive market. As a result, a great number of shopping malls has established in past two decades in all cities of the world. However, one section of the society believe that large shopping malls are replacing small shops, while other opposes this notation. I am also believes that large shopping malls play a pivotal role to boost the economic growth of the city and nation.
To initiate, there are multiple reasons of that large malls are replacing smalls shops. The first and foremost reason is that malls come with a large number of stores and other facilities under one roof. By doing this, shopping in malls people also save their time. In malls, there are variety of products available in one place. In malls, people feel comfortable and relax in the cool environment . People also feel save while shopping in malls because of security. Large shopping malls provide great opportunity for employment and business. Products and items can be available in whole sale rate and it is cheaper to buy from malls because these products directly purchased from companies and there is no middleman between this process.
Diving deeper into the topic, on other hand, some people believe that malls are not often convenient for lower and middle class families. Prices in malls are unreasonable. Some people believe that we can get fresh food from small shops with reasonable price. Small shops do not require large system. Small shops are usually around residential areas and people buy their products from nearest shop. Small shops also save energy consumption for government.
In the crux, there are plethora benefits of large shopping malls over smalls shops. But government should make some regulation which should prevent the small shops from diminishing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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...rtable and relax in the cool environment . People also feel save while shopping in...
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Suggestion: from the nearest
...ial areas and people buy their products from nearest shop. Small shops also save energy cons...
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...e buy their products from nearest shop. Small shops also save energy consumption for ...
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Suggestion:
...vent the small shops from diminishing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, therefore, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14790996785 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45466580301 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533762057878 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6551724138 166% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6176470313 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2380952381 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8095238095 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348198108064 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129425412397 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11241270619 0.071462118173 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251321342309 0.151781067708 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177063076424 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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