Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this ? Discuss with appropriate examples.
One of the most conspicuous trend of today’s contemporary era is influx in strip malls. People’s attitude towards shopping has significantly changed over the past. Although, some expertise believe large shopping plazas are taking over small shops, some disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss large shopping complex over taking small shops and department store are booming in urban areas.
Firstly, large shopping complex have plenty of benefits. Shopping malls are one-stop-shop with various facilities. For instance, ample place for car parks, kids play area, food court, cinema, supermarket, cloths shop and many more facilities under one roof. Versatility and convenience of shopping malls is gaining attention of the consumers. Hence, we can say large shopping complex are taking over small retail stores- due to it’s conduciveness.
Secondly, small shops are in demand, especially in central business district. Urban areas have less space available and is not suitable for large shopping complex. Small shops are best suited for people working in the city who can grab lunch, stationery, etc on the move. For example, Woolworths express, Seven-eleven, Coles express are designed to serve customers during rush hours. Therefore, it can be said small shops are still successfully running business.
To conclude, this essay discussed large shopping mall are taking over small shops and small stores are not effected by large shopping plazas. In my opinion, large shopping centres are taking over small retailers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62820512821 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70731470755 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7427174168 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3125 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321268446634 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123906212952 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938187330469 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228463188475 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808583147656 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.78 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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