Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished people influence on the regions they belong to?
The importance of region influence which was debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of native region has sparked the controversy over potential impact of the trend on a persons success. It can be said that native region influence success of a person, however, some people concern that accomplished person inspire region they belong to. This essay will elaborate how native region has little to do with success of a person and success individuals inspire the region they are from and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why accompanied individuals can have influence on the region, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that, people follow a role model and desire to follow their footsteps. Example for instance, Nelson Mandela, Mahatma Gandhi, Don Bradman has inspired many politicians and sportsman’s.
Famous individualism, therefore, can play a vital role in influencing the region.
Nevertheless, some people adopt on opposing view and tend to believe that native region is also significant as there are innumerable reasons for that, but the most prominent one lies in that fact that, region has no contribution towards a persons success. Example as an illustration, it’s the grit, perseverance and hard working qualities that makes a person successful. Thus, native region has no input towards a persons success.
For what has been discussed above. It can be concluded that successful individuals from the region can have strong influence on people is prominent, but qualities to achieve success should not be overlooked, as native region do not contribute to success of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35205992509 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98813506565 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1727279294 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424554497932 0.242375264174 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17032459542 0.0925447433944 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108658685915 0.071462118173 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239198702056 0.151781067708 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103187874509 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.