The only thing that interfere with my leaning is my education- Einstein. What does he mean by that? And do you think he is correct?
Humans are free spirited animals. We feel happy and comfortable in our natural environment. Einstein was a great physicists, he uncovered various theories. By this statement Albert Einstein infer that education holds individuals back from opening their mind to the undiscovered secrets of the world, and that humans are natural beings and learn best when they are in their natural habitat- up and personal with the nature. This essay will discuss, humans have potential to learn and grow in their natural environment and education can too, provide in-depth knowledge.
Firstly, Humans have capacity to go beyond naturally- defined goals. As primates, our ancestors have evolved by making natural selection. For example, inventing fire to cook and stay warm, agriculture and heard cattle for to feed. All these discoveries were made by human in their natural habitat, where they had ample of opportunities to keep exploring, creat and discover new things, there was no pressure of doing things certain way and writing an exam. Thus, we can say education restrict us from discovering our natural talent.
Secondly, education has contributed greatly to our midden world. Without education, our environment would have been unsustainable. For example, the cure for diseases, facts about quantum physics, artificial intelligence gained momentum after advancement in education. Education has played a vital part in irradiating social and political issues in the world, which are created by humans. Education has also given people a new prospect towards civilised life, and that people can change there circumstances. Therefor, we can say education does not hinder our capabilities.
To conclude, this essay discussed, Einstein view on education blocking humans from learning and why education is an important tool. In my opinion, education is burdensome, and I agree with Albert Einstein.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'physicist'?
Suggestion: physicist
...tural environment. Einstein was a great physicists, he uncovered various theories. By this...
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Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
...hat humans are natural beings and learn best when they are in their natural habitat-...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ducation is burdensome, and I agree with Albert Einstein.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52068965517 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86379050842 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.0313005485 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9444444444 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134968773282 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440588100768 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591355376494 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923935831823 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588439918221 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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