The only thing that interfere with my leaning is my education- Einstein. What does he mean by that? And do you think he is correct?
Humans are free spirited animals. We feel happy and comfortable in our natural environment. Einstein was a great physicist, he uncovered various theories of the universe. By this statement Albert Einstein infer that education holds individuals back from opening their mind to the undiscovered secrets of the world, and that humans are natural beings and learn to well when they are in their natural habitat- up and personal with the nature. This essay will discuss, humans have potential to learn and grow in their natural environment and education can too, provide in-depth knowledge.
Firstly, Humans have capacity to go beyond naturally- defined goals. As primates, our ancestors have evolved by making natural selections. For example, inventing fire to cook and stay warm, agriculture and cattle bearding to eat and survive starvation. All these discoveries were made by human in their natural habitat, where they had ample of opportunities to keep exploring, creat and discover new things, unlike education were you are forced to limit your knowledge, which is restricted to books and to examination hall. Thus, we can say education limits us from discovering our natural talent.
Secondly, education has contributed greatly to the modern world. Without education, our environment would have been unsustainable. For example, the cure for diseases, facts about quantum physics, artificial intelligence- gained momentum after advancement in education. Education has played a vital part in irradiating social and political issues in the world, which are created by humans. Education has also, given people a new prospect towards living a civilised life, through which, people can change there circumstances. Therefor, we can say education does not hinder our capabilities.
To conclude, this essay discussed, Einstein view on education blocking humans from discovering their natural talents, and why education is an important tool. In my opinion, education is burdensome, and I agree with Albert Einstein.
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also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57003257329 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91153833213 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631921824104 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.8021022967 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128201607404 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430891454887 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058293298025 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892129520421 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549109681241 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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