Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Parents' role in children's life is to look after them no matter their actions are. Not only do they have to feed their children, but also they ought to provide children with good education. Albeit some people believe that parents need merely to feed children and the rest is the school obligation, others think otherwise. In my opinion, both play a significant hole when looking after a kid.
To commence with, after the school time, parents should keep the kids' education. They are supposed to do homeworks, then pupils will certainly look for parents extra help. Thus, it is not only a matter of sending pupils to school and go to work because schools will do the job. Parents' job is also adding extra education.
However, schools also play a crucial role in children's act. Because they spend a huge amount of time with teachers and other classmates, they are learning from them and if the learning process is bad they will act accordingly. Therefore, their behavior is based on acting as their classmates do.
Finally, after weighing the parents and schools role I tend to disagree that only parents are held.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...he school time, parents should keep the kids education. They are supposed to do home...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 192.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82291666667 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39723124978 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 379.143842365 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9777483399 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1666666667 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193858879996 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780035604279 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041779940064 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128073986087 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164853793392 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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