Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s act. What is your opinion? Support it with personal example.
Parents are responsible for the upbringing of children's. Children's from early age learn many lessons of life from parents. It is always a moot question as to whether parents should be held responsible for children's act or not. This essay will discuss why parents should be legally held responsible for any illegal act of children's.
Firstly, children's spend large amount of time with their parents. Children's learn many facts like language and behavioral pattern from parents. For example, if parents speak in abusive way, it is going to be most likely that children's will observe it and would also try to imitate the act. Therefore, parents are legally bound for any children's act.
In addition, it is parents duty to teach social behavior and discipline to children's. Parents should thoroughly supervise their children and condemn them from doing any wrongdoing. For instance, if a child goes to visit a relative house and bring couple of toys from the house without any permission. It is parents responsibility to teach children moral values and not to take anyone's important things without any consent. Hence, it is apparent parents must be legally liable to children's act.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how parents are accountable for any mischievous or illegal act by children's. In my opinion, I agree that parent should be held legally responsible for any children's act.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...m parents. It is always a moot question as to whether parents should be held responsible for ...
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Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally responsible for any childrens act.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19469026549 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73538663488 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3478905544 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2666666667 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443387212757 0.242375264174 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183629088582 0.0925447433944 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130550079986 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315468044403 0.151781067708 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626605447354 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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