Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s act. What is your opinion? Support it with personal example.
Parental guidance plays an important role in children’s upbringing. Children are highly adaptive to environment they grow up. Although, some expertise believe that children’s behaviour is influenced by their parents and therefore, parents should be legally accountable for their behaviour, some disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss, parents should be responsible for children’s behaviour to a certain extent and children have ability to make good or bad choices.
Firstly, parents are held responsible for any good or bad behaviour of their offsprings. Children’s follow the footsteps of their parents, in terms of behavioural, physical, religious beliefs- making them true reflection of their parents and vice-versa. Parents sometimes forget to pay attention to their children and this affects their ability to make wise judgement. Similarly, constant pressure on children can push them away from parents and look for emotional support elsewhere, which could be dangerous as children might mix with bad company. Therefore, it can be said parents are to be held responsible for children’s choice of behaviour.
Secondly, education is an important tool in upbringing of children. If parents fail to dedicate time to their children, perhaps education institutions with value education can help them distinguish between right and wrong. For instance, nowadays students are provided with facilities at school such as counselling, school liaison police officers to make students aware of crime related incidents, teachers encouraging students to speak-up if they are being abused. Children’s can seek advice and hence it can be said, children do have a choice to make right decisions on their own.
To conclude, this essay discussed why parents attitude towards children either can be a pulse or a minus and children still can make right choices without parents involvement. In my opinion, it’s fair to held parents legally responsible for children’s behaviour.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73333333333 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16005625829 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4224718566 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433098333934 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179232055937 0.0925447433944 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104280171535 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304396086197 0.151781067708 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788933655307 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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