As a result of advances in medical care. Average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s society is furtherance in medical field. Medical science has made various break throughs in recent years. Medical assistance have improved quality and longevity of people’s life. Although, some expertise consider this break though as significant improvement, some expertise believe that it will affect negatively to the society. This essay will discuss, improvement in medical care is a marvellous refinement and ageing population can impact society negatively.
Firstly, maturing population can be a blessing and can bring opportunities. In our ageing world, new thinking requires that we view ageing as a life long and society-wide phenomenon, not a phenomenon exclusively pertaining to old persons. Ageing of the population permeates all social, economic and cultural spheres. Revolutionary change calls for new, revolutionary thinking, which can be positioned on policy formation and implementation on sound footing. Thus, benefits are vast of a ageing population.
Secondly, ageing population can bring challenges to the society. It becomes difficult to maintain supply and demand and sustain infrastructure. Increased ageing population can demand more aged care workers, more hospitals in already exhausted infrastructure, decline in housing affordability, overcrowded schools and transports, deforestation and scarcity of natural resources and increased crime rates. Therefore, it can be said growing ageing population can have negative impact on society.
In conclusion, this essay discussed, why improvement in medical care increases quality of life and satisfaction level, and why it can be detrimental in terms of resources. In my opinion, improvement in medical care means world can mature and learn from experienced mind, which is positive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...und footing. Thus, benefits are vast of a ageing population. Secondly, ageing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9427480916 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3029119452 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0288468077 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23205075664 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738275545348 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450962285332 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135853172587 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344290987452 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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