Nowadays, the number of schools are increasing in every sector due to the high population. The primary focus of those schools is to provide a better education for kids. The group of people are agreeing with this statement that school should prepare the student for university. likewise, other groups of people are claiming that schools should provide better education for future work to make students future bright. I disagree with this statement, the school should focus to prepare the student for university rather than for work.
Today world is a competitive world the schools should focus to provide practical knowledge for the kids which help them to figure out to do some official job in future. If the school only focus to prepare the student for university study they will be compromised on theoretical knowledge which would be bad for kids future.
so school should prepare to provide the quality education in school which help them in good human being in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...education for kids. The group of people are agreeing with this statement that school should ...
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Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Likewise
...uld prepare the student for university. likewise, other groups of people are claiming th...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...m to figure out to do some official job in future. If the school only focus to prepare th...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e which would be bad for kids future. so school should prepare to provide the qu...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ool which help them in good human being in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 8.36945812808 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 1207.87684729 68% => OK
No of words: 162.0 242.827586207 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04320987654 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46580794257 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 139.433497537 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 379.143842365 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0729148005 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.125 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320798662224 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179550000615 0.0925447433944 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150755894726 0.071462118173 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200878864127 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121678187882 0.0609392437508 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 55.0591133005 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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