Some languages are increasingly spoken in different countries while the usage of others is rapidly declining Is this a positive or a negative development

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Some languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?

There are some languages which the people are speaking and it is keep on increasing but a very few languages are not spoken and it become decreases. Surely it would be a positive development that the total number of languages decreases and it would make the opportunity to grasp many knowledges between the people.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefit of decreasing the usage of some languages would build the bridge between the communities and people to understand the worldly knowledge in different language would increase the thinking capability and searching initiatives as well.
On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, declining of some languages has negative consequences in various ways. Firstly, it would cause misunderstanding between the societies and groups. Secondly, it diminishes the culture of the particular people and ancient civilization as well.
Lastly, in my opinion, it would great to minimize the usage of many languages in this world and construct a common language for human’s communication and sharing their intellectual powers.
Taking these points into consideration, from a personal perspective, without a shadow of a doubt, I conclude that ascending of using some languages would create a positive development for mankind.

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Average: 9.2 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38349514563 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09754767252 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6651589749 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.625 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.875 7.25397266985 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274243208465 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109354220652 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705788329904 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142805518549 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035231855869 0.0609392437508 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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