Some people believe law changes human behaviour. Do you agree/disagree?
In these days, people often take a variety of viewpoints when it comes to most daily issues. To give a illustration, while many people believe that law can change human behaviour, other hold the opinion that this is not the case. This essay offers some insights in favor of the former outlook
There are numerous reliable grounds that support the belief that human behaviour can be altered by law. First and foremost, law is a set of govermental enforcement which applies for all citizens and residents of a country. Should an individual breach any of these regulations, it shall be deemed as unacceptable and the law-breaker would be subject to punishment for their misconduct. This is especially true when it comes to heinous crimes such as drug trafficking and murder. Without the laws, it can be argued that people would be able to commit crimes on purpose because they are fully aware that they would not hold any responsibilty nor punishment
In addition, ample evidence from a numerous studies also suggests that law can act as a deterrent to wrongdoers and therefore promote a better society and maintain a sustainable development. There is no doubt that people would obey to the laws in order to avoid punishment such as fines and imprisonment. To give an illustration, in Singapore and some other countries, no one dares to traffick drug of any kind and amount since they are fully aware that the punishment for their wrongdoing would be the death penalty.
In conclustion, from the above analysis, it is obvious that law can change human behaviour even though some people may not even realize it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9304029304 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75562095474 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9133493055 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23165064001 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101554618481 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982061619018 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171113362449 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833691053773 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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