Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for many reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and conclude.
Whether boarding schools are excellent option for children or not have been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of boarding schools through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay on mine I will try to enunciate both sides of this debate.
The most prominent reason is that some people put their children in boarding school as both the parents are working and no one is there to take care of them. Moreover, this can be a better option for those parents because if they will hire a care taker to look after their children might not be a good idea. In addition, in boarding school children will learn all the manners in terms of social and will achieve good academic knowledge. Furthermore, they will be in the teacher’s observation and will not be addicted to video games and other social media.
On the other hand, some people reckon that boarding school is not a good option. I think somehow these believe is true at some point as boarding schools are quite expensive and ordinary people cannot afford it. Moreover, when children will stay away from their family then they will have a lack of attachment with their parents and other relatives. In addition, they will not care much about their parent’s feelings which can lead the family in dilemma.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of boarding schools. I would like to conclude that boarding school has own benefits and drawbacks. However, for both working parents can be a good option but others should avoid if one parent is available to take care of their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ailable to take care of their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, while, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 6.10837438424 278% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 314.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8152866242 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50351896441 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509554140127 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0289707693 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274805189071 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115503269452 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723224459486 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18924882802 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016230080654 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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