Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do you support it or not?
The importance of role model which was debatable has now become controversial. The substantial influence of film stars and sports stars has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend on youngsters in recent years. It can be said that sports and movie celebrities play a role model for younger generation, however, some concern that film stars and sports personalities are not a inspiring figure and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why celebrities from sports and film industry inspire young people, but the most conspicuous one stems from that fact that, famous individualism inspire young minds. Example for instance, Michal Jorden - sports star and Robin Williams- an actor , inspired young people to posses grit and humanity to survive the world respectively. Movie starts and sport starts, therefore play a vital role in inspiring young generation.
Nevertheless, some people have adopted opposing view and trend to think that celebrities influence can have negative impact on young people is also significant, as there are innumerable reasons for that, but the most predominant one lies in the fact that, celebrities from both industries live duel life, and hide their real personalities. Example as an illustration, recent ball tempering scandals in the cricket match. Moreover, substance abuse by actor Charley Sheen. Thus, idealising which celebrities can have negative influence on young minds.
For what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that film and sports starts make a positive role model is prominent, but negative influence by celebrities should not be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sports star and Robin Williams- an actor , inspired young people to posses grit an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44015444015 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9043308138 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.6988962322 50.4703680194 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.090909091 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231485691135 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929099247006 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087054761069 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160834906518 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116642444236 0.0609392437508 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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