Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes is one of the most widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long-term health costs are high- for the smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.Do Governments have a legitimate role to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to an individual?
One of the most conspicuous trend in today’s contemporary era is that people are consuming more tobacco products, than before. Promoting tobacco products can be associated with influx of tobacco consumption. Although, to address this issue some expertise believe government plays a pivotal role in protecting individuals from adverse effects of tobacco, whereas other suggest it’s individual’s responsibility. This essay will discuss, how government can take portion of responsibility to stop people from consuming tobacco and it’s Individual’s liability to look after their own health.
Firstly, smoking is injurious to health. Education people about detrimental effects of smoking tobacco can make people conscious of their decision. Government can play an important role in spreading health and wellbeing awareness among people via mass media. Imposing hefty tax on tobacco products may lead to decline in buying them. Government can issue health warning and keep general public informed about repercussions of smoking. Hence, we can say government can play a part in helping people make informed decision.
Secondly, individuals health is personal responsibility. Individual should make intuitive decisions when health is concerned. It is dependent on an individual to chose a health or unhealthy lifestyle. A pack of cigarettes continue warming message and it’s available in all languages, however, if an individual still decides to smoke, knowing the facts and health consequences- they have no one to blame, if their health condition worsens. Therefore, we can say it’s in individual power to chose their lifestyle.
To conclude, this essay discussed how government have little power in controlling people’s smoking habits and health is personal accountability. In my opinion, it’s the individual responsibility to make informed decisions about their health not governments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The proper name in singular (Education) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...oking is injurious to health. Education people about detrimental effects of smoking to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nment can issue health warning and keep general public informed about repercussions of smoking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93906810036 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28021420703 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3307186555 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112929680052 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475282809402 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317741272093 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734033035186 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210240124799 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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