In A War Of Ideas, It Is People Who Get Killed”. Does A Common Man Suffer From A Group’s Ideology?
The importance of ideas which was debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of war of ideas has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend on common man, in recent years. It can be said that, ordinary people suffer due to clash of ideas, however, ideas can also change peoples circumstance and improve standers of living. This essay will elaborate why, normal people suffer due to disagreement between governments, and why exchange of ideas can play a vital role in exploring growth options and thus, lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why, war of ideas can impact ordinary people, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that, differences in opinion can cause adversities in the world. Example for instance, India is a democratic country, politicians use religious diversity to manipulate people’s mind- divide and rule policy, which hinders common mans progress and, ultimately there is still poverty, lack of jobs and education opportunities for common man. Difference in ideas therefore, can affect normal person life negatively.
Nevertheless, some people adopt opposing view and tend to believe that, ideas can enhance creativity, as there are innumerable reasons for that, but the most prominent one lies in the fact that, people get inspired by ideas. Example as an illustration, developed countries help developing countries with ideas to improve living standers of people, budgeting, improved infrastructure and economic growth, this practices at United Nations to help and support poor countries. Hence, it can be said ideas promote creativity.
For what has been said above, it can be concluded that, ideas are prominent, but wellbeing of common man should not be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
... illustration, developed countries help developing countries with ideas to improve living ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41071428571 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9100262114 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8178980814 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.727272727 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161979852621 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575936930814 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532650432401 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974587137019 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404481419228 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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