You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?
Global warming is at its peak, and its advancement has brought some drastic changes in climate across the globe. Climate is a varied field of study which includes areas such as solar physics, metrology, oceanography and global biology. This essay will study global change in biology and it causes of getting extinct.
Firstly, climate change in recent years have forced many species to get extinct. The excess greenhouse gas effects have made the earth's temperature rise causing glaciers meltdown. For example, summers are getting more hotter and winter is now for only short period of time which, makes the biological environment imbalance on radar. Therefore, hazardous effects on climate change reciprocates the biological and ecosystem in negative way.
Secondly, climate wrath is the main coincidence to understand significance of global change biology. It can help us restore the lost ecosystem and biology that counteract the future challenges. For example, a proper platform need to be structured in studying the effects of climate change and excess green house effects. Necessary stable living arrangements must be done for biological environment during every season if the temperature rises or drops to avoid further getting extinct. Hence, it is apparent to study ecological interaction with environment and conservation biology to protect species and habitat.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how the high greenhouse gas effects reduce the ecological and biological system and what measure need to be taken to protect them from extinction. In my opinion, ecology and biology are the main areas to study climate change in recent years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...ss greenhouse gas effects have made the earths temperature rise causing glaciers meltd...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'hotter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: hotter
...tdown. For example, summers are getting more hotter and winter is now for only short period...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...hotter and winter is now for only short period of time which, makes the biological environment...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ological and ecosystem in negative way. Secondly, climate wrath is the main coin...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atform need to be structured in studying the effects of climate change and excess...
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Line 5, column 583, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith environment and conservation biology to protect species and habitat. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4921875 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76628699704 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0187016538 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124549225054 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495548406464 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507672799353 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837957268726 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315249193473 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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