You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?
One of the conspicuous trend of today’s contemporary era is drastic changes in climate. Climate patterns have changed over the past few decades and has effected earths wellbeing. Although, there are various fields of study concerning change in climate, climatology is regarded as an important field of study. This essay will discuss, climatology as chosen field of study and how it can be used to make future environments.
Firstly, climatologist are atmospheric scientists who study earths climate. They collect data from various sources to study weather patterns. For example, ice cores, soils, water, air and even planets to study its weather conditions and how those conditions affect the earth and its inhabitants. Therefore, it can be said climatology is a widespread field of study of climatic patterns.
Secondly, climatologist can play a vital role in saving life from natural disasters. Research done by climatologists can be used to predict potential natural calamities, agricultural planning, building design, and weather forecasting. Which can help people make informed decisions in case of emergency. Hence, we can say knowing past and future climatic conditions can help us making better choices.
To conclude, this essay discussed climatology as a field of atmospheric science and how it can be used to predict past and future weather patterns. In my opinion, climatology as academic subjects will give me exposure to field work as well as analysing data and make a little contribution to help make our planet beautiful again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
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Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ilding design, and weather forecasting. Which can help people make informed decisions...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
... future climatic conditions can help us making better choices. To conclude, this e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43388429752 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03917964857 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0992761132 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997764815133 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395485510266 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034089877234 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651426298168 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333079622769 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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