how improve my essay

tell u give score system and tell me my mistake in writtening ,how i imporve it.

4 months ago
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watan
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for example, in this essay:

http://www.testbig.com/gmatgre-essays/some-people-believe-order-be-effective-political-leaders-must-yield-public-opinion

this is the essay evaluation: 

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 392 350
No. of Characters: 1931 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.45 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.926 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.572 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.89 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.596 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

The first number is your essay's value while the second number is the ideal one. 

If your essay's value is as close as the ideal one, the essay score will be higher if you don't write the essay out of topic. Our essay exports will check it out too. and  the final score will be the E-rater score plus human's score. 

3 months ago
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