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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Studying, traveling, learning some more techniques are all among the huge variety of ways that parents help their teenage children prepare for adult life. Some may increase their knowledge and gain a specific skill to earn their own living in future, while some may help them accumulating experiences and training their ability to cooperate with others. Keeping in mind that kid's time is limited, balancing between all kinds of activities becomes a big issue. As a result, some parents may claim that studying is most important of all and should allow no time for other activities such as a part-time job. In spite of that, I agree with the statement that one of the best way to help them prepare ...

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