Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning.
Nowadays I live in modern era which is offer an advance technology such as internet connection. I can learn from many media such as internet, television, teacher, radio, and book. So learning is not about distance. Distance cannot make me to stop study. So, I prefer to study using online media platform because it is the easiest way and no need more money.
I think at this time, internet connection is not the most problem. Many colleges provide this connection to support their student. I just provide the modem to get the connection. For example, I am a student who takes IBT class preparation. Besides I learn from lecture, I go to media online such as twitter and blog to get more information about it. It is very helpful. I also reading book which is help me a lot. Another of that, I install software which is support to learn by myself.
I can reduce spending my money too. For instance, I should spending money to get apartment and pay for living cost. But if I learn using online platform, I just pay the tuition fee. It means I can reduce and save money.
Besides that, learning online makes me in the different countries can touch together. I also can seeing my lecturer faces. I can use some of chatting programs, for example skype, gtalk and many more. Hence, I can do two ways communication there. I get to see his face, hear voice, makes my sound. It is seems like discussing together. Also I do some assessment from him. He can assess me and I get my feedback. Thus, I know how I should do to get high score. Although we are distance far away.
In conclusion, distance is not the most problem for study. Eventough I am in Indonesia and my lecturer stays in Canada. Because media online has already exist now, I can get my study there.
Sentence: Nowadays I live in modern era which is offer an advance technology such as internet connection.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and offer
Sentence: I also reading book which is help me a lot.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and help
Sentence: For instance, I should spending money to get apartment and pay for living cost.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to should and spending
Sentence: I also can seeing my lecturer faces.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to can and seeing
Sentence: It is seems like discussing together.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and seems
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.944 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 30 15
No. of Words: 320 350
No. of Characters: 1379 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.229 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.309 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.42 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.944 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.567 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5