As the population grows and businesses develop, the land becomes more precious than ever. If I received some land, I would use it for three purposes. I would divide the land into three sections for constructing a living house, a small garden back of my house and a kindergarten.
If I received some land, I would devote the main part of it to build my living house. Having my own home, has always been one of my dreams. I like to have a home with sufficient rooms for all members of my family and also a big hall for welcoming guests. It also should have a big and well constructed kitchen because I really love cooking and I spend almost three hours a day in kitchen. In addition, I have a lot of books and I need a relatively large place for my library, too.
Furthermore, I would allocate the backyard of my house to start a garden if I received some land. Being a lover of plants, I would start a beautiful garden in my backyard full of fruit trees and flowers. It is very peaceful for me to spend some hours a day gardening. Also, having a garden near my house is useful for physical health because air pollution in cities threatens health of people. Thus, a garden near my house results in somewhat cleaning the air. In addition I can use the fruits of my garden and avoid spending money on expensive fruits of markets.
I would like to establish a kindergarten in the third part of my imaginative land. I think this would be a good idea because in busy lives of today, most parents should spend all their day hours working. So, existence of a kindergarten in a residential place would be helpful for parents. Moreover, considering the unemployment problem, I would be able to employ some people in the kindergarten. Of course, I could earn some money by managing the kindergarten.
To sum up, achieving some land would be a very good chance for everyone regarding their needs. For me, building a living property and establishing a kindergarten and a beautiful garden near it, would be the best use of the land. In this way, I would have a peaceful life with shelter and earning.
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