Many people visit museums when they travel to new places Why do you think people visit museums Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Traveling has the most important in our lives. We travel there with our friends or with our families to discover new things. Some people would not prefer to go to the museum when they ravel to foreign country,others would agree that there are a lot of benefits from going there. In my view I would strongly choose to visit the foreign country museum first because of couple of reasons.

The first important reasons is that we could learn the history of the country that we are visiting. In order to enjoy our trip, we should know many information and many details about the new places. At museum, we could find the a lot of toursit adviser that could help to know the country more better. For example, I could remember before two years ago when I visit Jermany. Once I arrived I went to the Jerlad museum which is located in the downtown. At fisrt, I felt like I am lost because it is new country with new languge and new people. Luckily, once I entered I found lovely guy who offered his help. He took me around the museum explaining to me every details in the museum. He told me from this small place you could learn about the country. Consequently, I spent 4 hours to see the historical figures of Germany and to learn their life style in past and in future. Besides it showed to e what their favorite food and who they were very mighty to build this country. So, when I went out side I did not get confused because I knew many things on that country besides I spend un forgettable 10 days there. AS you can see, visiting museum of new country would help to get used on that country and get many information that we can not get even from social media.

The second important reasons is that it will be un expensive place to enjoy our time. When the government want to attract more visitors to its country, they work on making some places like parks, zoo and museums low price. For instance, I remember when my mother went to England. She did not take with her a lot of money. Luckily, before her travel she searched about the low prices touris places there. She found the King William museum one of them. Once, she arrived there, she took the taxi to museum and she spent the whole day there.Consequently, she enjoyed her time with low price ticket and she got a a lot of knowledge about that country beside she met very nice people. This experience taught me that, when we decided to visit new places we should go to the museum because it will not very cost and we will enjoy our time.

In sum, Museums are the best places that we should visit. It not only tell the history of that country, but also will not cost us a lot of money. So, all of should go to museum as soon as we arrive to new country.

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Traveling has the most important in our lives.
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Sentence: At museum, we could find the a lot of toursit adviser that could help to know the country more better.
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Sentence: When the government want to attract more visitors to its country, they work on making some places like parks, zoo and museums low price.
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Sentence: Once, she arrived there, she took the taxi to museum and she spent the whole day there.Consequently, she enjoyed her time with low price ticket and she got a a lot of knowledge about that country beside she met very nice people.
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Sentence: So, all of should go to museum as soon as we arrive to new country.
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Sentence: At fisrt, I felt like I am lost because it is new country with new languge and new people.
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Sentence: Luckily, before her travel she searched about the low prices touris places there.
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