The parents spend too much time on determining future things of children. Children can make choices by their own.
As for me, my parents have never forced me to choose the future as they hope, from which I certainly benefit a lot. Based on my own experience, I agree with the statement that the parents should not spend too much time on determining the future of their children but allow them make choices by their own. I would like to explore my two fundamental ones as follow.
Firstly, making choices by their own will definitely contributes to their independence. For those who always follow their parents' suggestion, there's no doubt that they prefer to consult their parents whenever they get into the puzz...
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Sentence: To draw my conclusion, take both the independence ande the positive attitude which children can gain from making choice by their own into consideration, it's more sagacious for parents to give their children the opportunity to make choices on their future.
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